When looking at my narrative from this semester, I think it is very accurate, at least in my mind, for what I did well, and what I need to improve on. For the things I need to improve on, I have some ideas on what I should do to help myself. As for questions or confusions, I don't really think I had many.
The main goal I have for the next semester is to improve the flow of my writing, because I think that that would really improve my essay writing as a whole. Included in this goal, I think, is improving my transitions, to flow between paragraphs, and content in the essay- for example, not taking as much time on a simple part of the essay or being more to the point. To help with this goal, I want to try and see Mr. Garces Kiley more often in the earlier drafting stages. For the F-451 Essay, because I didn't want to go see him until I had more substantial work done, the slots filled up and I didn't get to see him at all, so this semester, I want to go earlier, and improve my work from the start of drafting.
In the narrative, I didn't really find anything too troubling or confusing. It's pretty much what I expected, except maybe that my guesses were off slightly in some places, but overall it was close to what I expected, and things I didn't really see coming make sense to me now in the narrative, so when I read it, I was not too troubled by anything, nor was I confused.
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